22A - Elevator Pitch No. 3
I thought what was really important feedback from last pitch was the fact that many people said that my voice was louder and more projected. I really appreciate the constructive criticism that everyone provided and I hope that my third attempt is my best yet. Based on the feedback, I made sure to wear nicer clothes and talk for a longer period of time. I think it is very important to make sure that you describe your product well but dont drone on about it too much and lose the audience's attention. I think the sweet spot is right around 30-45 seconds before the audience assumes that you're talking too much about your product.